tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post7544289319810638745..comments2023-05-08T18:28:21.267+10:00Comments on देस परदेस / ਦੇਸ- ਪ੍ਰਦੇਸ: ਯਾਦਾਂ / यादेंदेस परदेस /ਦੇਸ - ਪ੍ਰਦੇਸhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17351085060705267903noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-78705968329995271552012-04-30T02:19:00.813+10:002012-04-30T02:19:00.813+10:00sundar rachana ke liye badhaee..sundar rachana ke liye badhaee..दीनदयाल शर्माhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07486685825249552436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-67174420360045246202012-04-28T12:09:07.910+10:002012-04-28T12:09:07.910+10:00yaado ki vaadi mei gum hue lafz
sundar kavita mei...yaado ki vaadi mei gum hue lafz <br />sundar kavita mei dhal kar <br />ek asardaar ehsaas ban gaye haiN...<br /><br />badhaaee .daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-33236497776317798332012-04-27T15:59:45.973+10:002012-04-27T15:59:45.973+10:00chote veer Varinderjeet ne kalma de kaafle naal ka...chote veer Varinderjeet ne kalma de kaafle naal kadam milaun di koshish shuru kar diti hai. rab kare eh koshish jaari rahe ate hamesha changa likhda rahe.<br />shubh kaamnavan<br /><br />devinder sidhudevinder kaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06493726891746559148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-20057932532487074202012-04-26T23:18:45.314+10:002012-04-26T23:18:45.314+10:00sunder kavita badhai
rachanasunder kavita badhai <br />rachanaRachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15249225250149760362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-72957575133636456872012-04-25T22:11:51.682+10:002012-04-25T22:11:51.682+10:00ਮੁਖੀ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਵਾੜੀ ਗਲ ,ਕਵਿਤਾ ਵੱਲੋਂ ਮੁਬਾਰਕਾ ਜੀ /-
...ਮੁਖੀ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਵਾੜੀ ਗਲ ,ਕਵਿਤਾ ਵੱਲੋਂ ਮੁਬਾਰਕਾ ਜੀ /-<br /> ਯਾਦਾਂ ਦਿਯਾ ਸੰਦੂਕ ਕੈਦ ਵਰਗੀ ਨੇ ,<br /> ਖੁਲਦੀ ਹੈ ,ਸਕੂਨ ਮਿਲਦਾ ਹੈ -udaya veer singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14896909744042330558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-55764137752014501772012-04-25T16:14:09.940+10:002012-04-25T16:14:09.940+10:00वाह.....बहुत प्यारी कविता है,बधाई...।वाह.....बहुत प्यारी कविता है,बधाई...।रवीन्द्र प्रभातhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11471859655099784046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-38656764276221176902012-04-25T14:20:55.348+10:002012-04-25T14:20:55.348+10:00बहुत अच्छी कविता है...अगर आपने हिन्दी अनुवाद न दिय...बहुत अच्छी कविता है...अगर आपने हिन्दी अनुवाद न दिया होता तो इतनी प्यारी सी रचना से हम वंचित रह जाते...। बधाई...।<br />प्रियंकाप्रियंका गुप्ता https://www.blogger.com/profile/10273874634914180450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-41897046598398577772012-04-25T13:18:37.039+10:002012-04-25T13:18:37.039+10:00वाह...!
बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति!
आपने हिन्दी अनुवाद ...वाह...!<br />बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति!<br />आपने हिन्दी अनुवाद करके बहुत अच्छा किया मित्रवर!डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09313147050002054907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-17769758060375852842012-04-25T13:11:48.432+10:002012-04-25T13:11:48.432+10:00बहुत ख़ूब!!बहुत ख़ूब!!DR. ANWER JAMALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06580908383235507512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-58793654606760876722012-04-25T12:22:25.035+10:002012-04-25T12:22:25.035+10:00बढ़िया रु बरु हुए..बढ़िया रु बरु हुए..Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8592957205100601298.post-9727761920776044872012-04-25T11:31:16.522+10:002012-04-25T11:31:16.522+10:00Beeti bato ka yaad hokar aansu ban jane tak ka saf...Beeti bato ka yaad hokar aansu ban jane tak ka safar chand shabdo me hi pura karwa diya.bahut hi sundar shabd-pryog...<br /><br />Aabhar ek naye kalakar ko prastut karne liye<br /><br />kunwar jikunwarji'shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03572872489845150206noreply@blogger.com